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Loved it
but way too short. I hope the next chapter is coming quick!
Gah! I love this story
I'll admit it -- at first I was skeptical about having Ash involved. I didn't want Sheila to be with anyone else, even temporarily, besides Hunter. I pictured Ash as an older, more mature man/wolf, similar to Hunter. You caught me by surprise by making him younger, full of angst, and very jealous of what Hunter has.
I love the connection between Hunter and Sheila. The way she trusts him completely, knowing he would not hurt her. Am I sensing that we are drawing to a close on this story? That's a bitter sweet thought --- I'd like it to go on, and on, and on.
Wonderful!
This is the first time I've made a comment....this story is
great. Can't wait for the next chapter...and maybe later Ash's own story.
hot hot hot
ok seriously you have to keep writing bout them. and the thing with ash he should give her the curse fuck her and then thats it. Maybe him and hunter become really good friends, and sheila has a friend who would be interested in ash. but will hunt and sheila ever have kids? it has to be possible since its gentric, please whatever you do dont stop this story till all the lose ends are put together and the full story is told, i hate when writers do that on here. thats how they lose valuable readers, but anyways i absolutley love this story. its romantic and sweet and freaking erotic as hell. trust me my boyfriend loves when i read this story i get so turned on ;D by the way he said thanks lol
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