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A Good Story
But it seemed kinda rushed. I like the fact that she's willing to give herself to him, though.
Nice story, but...
I agree with the other person who commented, it could have been longer, and it would have been nice to see more of a relationship develop between Lena and Pete before she throws herself at him. But what you've got here is pretty good.
puzzling
we are told that this beautiful woman is rotten with maps, yes missed the interstate by many miles.
yes pete is a kind and good man, yes she was deflowered, and the experience was a pleasant one.
but, the next day, what was her destination, why did she opt not to continue on her journey?
who employed this lovely virgin, what is her source of income, why can she slough off all past ties for this nice and gentle man?
questions, questions, and they could have been anticipated had the story been developed with greater skill.
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