All Comments on 'Stripped in the Pool'

That was an awesome story I started playing with my clit, it would have been great if she had sex in front of the other guys. bullito@aol.com Thanks Christi

Really loved your story. More please!

WOW! Honestly this was extremely hot! I Loved how you kept the story as close to reality as you could! The protagonist had real human emotions and didn't start begging or something which would of ruinned the whole thing; She was trying to hide her exitement (at first) which was so sexy and makes it possible to actually relate to the character in the story!

Please continue writting like this, there is a strong lack of real humane emotion in "erotica" and you were able to put some in it (like previously mentionned) so again keep it up!

Thanks!

Very good story! Keep on writing!

Reminds me of a marco polo game we had one summer night in my parents pool. My blindfolded neighbor swimming around in her bikini was just too much for us to ignore :)

I was sure things would escalate, watching her come, is not something I've eve r seen. This took some kind of bravery on her part, could Brad of stopped more than two of the guys if they wanted more.

An absolutely beautiful story. It's a shame you haven't written more. It was emotional, relatable, realistic. Brad is such a sweet, gentle guy, one I wish I could meet. The fact that no one forced themselves on her and she enjoyed being the only one naked around them just was such a pleasant change from how forceful these stories can normally be. Sweet, beautiful, sensual. I wish there were more stories on Literotica like this. <3

Interesting story

Perhaps the earlier part on her swimming alone could be lengthened.

6 is perhaps too many. Maybe no more than 3.

Perhaps it could also be case of her taking the top off on her own, putting it at one side of the pool. Then when Brad and friends came in, they saw what had happened.