That was an awesome story I started playing with my clit, it would have been great if she had sex in front of the other guys. bullito@aol.com Thanks Christi
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Anonymous10/09/07
Superb
Really loved your story. More please!
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Anonymous11/09/09
S.E.X.Y.
WOW! Honestly this was extremely hot! I Loved how you kept the story as close to reality as you could! The protagonist had real human emotions and didn't start begging or something which would of ruinned the whole thing; She was trying to hide her exitement (at first) which was so sexy and makes it possible to actually relate to the character in the story!
Please continue writting like this, there is a strong lack of real humane emotion in "erotica" and you were able to put some in it (like previously mentionned) so again keep it up!
Thanks!
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Anonymous03/06/11
Brava!
Very good story! Keep on writing!
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Anonymous06/19/13
Stripped in the pool
Reminds me of a marco polo game we had one summer night in my parents pool. My blindfolded neighbor swimming around in her bikini was just too much for us to ignore :)
I was sure things would escalate, watching her come, is not something I've eve r seen. This took some kind of bravery on her part, could Brad of stopped more than two of the guys if they wanted more.
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WOW
That was an awesome story I started playing with my clit, it would have been great if she had sex in front of the other guys. bullito@aol.com Thanks Christi
Superb
Really loved your story. More please!
S.E.X.Y.
WOW! Honestly this was extremely hot! I Loved how you kept the story as close to reality as you could! The protagonist had real human emotions and didn't start begging or something which would of ruinned the whole thing; She was trying to hide her exitement (at first) which was so sexy and makes it possible to actually relate to the character in the story!
Please continue writting like this, there is a strong lack of real humane emotion in "erotica" and you were able to put some in it (like previously mentionned) so again keep it up!
Thanks!
Brava!
Very good story! Keep on writing!
Stripped in the pool
Reminds me of a marco polo game we had one summer night in my parents pool. My blindfolded neighbor swimming around in her bikini was just too much for us to ignore :)
Nicly done.
I was sure things would escalate, watching her come, is not something I've eve r seen. This took some kind of bravery on her part, could Brad of stopped more than two of the guys if they wanted more.
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