All Comments on 'Rushing the Passer'

by Vampladydi

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webbo1webbo1over 16 years ago
Got me hard in a flash

Keep this up and I will need a cold shower - great story baby keep 'em cumming

lifethruphotoslifethruphotosover 16 years ago
Very Hot!!

Awesome. You got me going big time with this one.

skinneydipskinneydipover 16 years ago
I'm envious

Gosh...I really like it!. Plenty hardcore enough to please my carnal hunger....but the passion between the two lovers also comes out. Gee...I'm envious of them. I've come back to this story a couple of times. Thanks, writer for posting this.

Lia MondeLia Mondeover 14 years ago
Hard Score

Often brief stories jump too quickly to carnal thrashing without context. However, this admirably frames the action in a contained period that allows rapid development.

Well-crafted and erotic. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Perfect

This is the perfect halftime story. Her excitement and observation of the situation,taking charge of her desires and giving him a most memorable halftime of any game. I was entrhalled and excited from beginning to end!

Well Done!

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