All Comments on 'A Beautiful Thing'

This got placed under the "mature" category. But in your story, I either missed or there weren't any references to one of them being much older than the other. They talk about soccer practice, him being in school, but that's it. Was the category wrong?<br><br>

Also, there were a few instances where you slipped from the first person perspective (I rubbed my hand along her arm) into the third person (and then he cupped her ass) within the same sentence. Just do a careful editing job and most of those should be easy to fix.

I could almost see their wet glistening bodies.

A mutual coupling of two horny lovers is always a beat experience. 5 stars.

Nothing in this world is better than being absolutely fucked silly by a thick firm hard BLACK clock! (Well maybe a quick reloaded too.) I can't help it. Other races just don't really don't know how to use their equipment.

I found out in college just how good BLACK sex was, even with BLACK women

too.

I was converted early while in college, thank goodness! I even still occasionally try sex with white guys and white women but always end up going BLACK again and again.

Orpheum69