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No Better Than The First Attempt
Please don't try a 3rd time before taking a few years of writing lessons.
Bravo
Hy geekychick,
I thought i seen this story before awhile back It is still a good story to read .
Pat
Another great story from geekychick!
I've read most of your stories, and although this one wasn't one of your hotter ones, I enjoyed it nevertheless. Anyone new to your style, should read "The Watcher," so that they can appreciate erotic writing at its best.
You telegraphed the ending ...
...and I figured it out early on in the story.
gutsy effort!
good for you on your effort. i envy you and your ability. keep it up!
I liked it!
Wish you were still writing. Sometimes good porn just needs a woman's touch.
Wow. Lame.
I'm underwhelmed.
All about communication
Liked the story, although it is kind of sad in a way. Of all the people you should be able to talk to about something like this, it is your spouse. But how many of us just keep our mouths shut and suffer until it is to late, I know been there and have the bruises from it.
Okay
I gave it five stars because of the outcome. There was no cheating and no betrayal. Just a husband and wife who needed a wake-up call.
Booo, hisss, boring
What a waste of 10 minutes it was to read this!
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