Immortal Love

Lovely Story

Very nice. More of a romance than Erotic Horror, but well done, Geekychick. Lots of luck.

Woohoo! I'm first..

Great story geekybabe! Creepy and sexy. A winner for Halloween. Good luck in the contest.

Nice short story

So sue me, I'm a sucker for happy endings.

Creepy,

but good, and scary too, just what you like in a Halloween story. Good luck in the contest.

How come you never called me?

Hey, I remember now. You were the one who I danced with and you gave me that huge hicky. How come you never called me?

Damn.

Scary story. I'll be on the lookout for you the next time I'm in a crowd of good looking women.

great job

Good short story... good luck with the contest.

deliciously melancholy

The ending, with her having inadvertently let so much time slip away was a poignant jab that brought home how apart she really was. That she only made him her mate after spending time nursing him back to health, after he'd pined for her, made all the difference.

Well done!

I love the romance factor, and you wrote it very well.

Good story - good luck with the contest.

very nice!