Not to worry, Daniel. The story's clearly tagged "sharing" - so anyone who objects to sharing doesn't have to read it.
I more or less agree that the story's not strong on character development, but then again, it's just not that kind of story, is it?
But it gets at least two extra "stars" in its rating just for pissing off the whiners.
There's no reason why this story shouldn't be in "Loving Wives," particularly with the tag "sharing."
There's no evidence of fetishism in it (to anyone who actually knows what a 'fetish' is) and it barely skirts the edges of "group sex." The narrator is clearly enjoying his open - and very likely quite loving - relationship with his wife, and she is enjoying their relationship, too.
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Anonymous11/30/10
If this story is going to be rated
based on whiners, then I'll have to give it two stars less to offset. Authors those admirers of yours are not doing you a favor. Tell them to voice their opinion to you and not worry about what others think. We all have our opinion and can voice it anyway we wish.
So that anonymous will understand, I'll type slowly.
This story is clearly tagged as a "sharing" story. And its title and "blurb" line both suggest that this is about couples sharing.
That does not necessarily imply fetishes, or group sex, or anything but what it is: a story about a marriage in which the LOVING wife is shared.
I'll give it five stars under my registered name AND as an "anonymous."
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Anonymous12/01/10
Wow
Why the fuck would you two be married, for a tax break? I guess this is what you do when there is no love or respect. What a turn off.
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Anonymous12/01/10
Great story, DanielUK.
Married people who find sexual adventure together will never be understood by those who prefer to cheat, or to lead lives of quiet desperation.
Hope to see more from you soon - and be sure to post it in Loving Wives, where most stories about open, sharing marriages usually are posted.
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Anonymous12/01/10
As stated.
Webothdo read the story. 1 star. Don't care where you put this shit.
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Anonymous12/05/10
Moralists on a porn story site? Seriously?
Any idiot who complains about infidelity in a sex story on a erotic story site needs to really get a life.
Dude, it's a sex site. It's the Loving Wives section. If your delicate senses are offended, go to a Christian bible story site.
I didn't like the story much, and I normally would have given it two or three stars, but because of all this nonsense I'm giving it five to equalize things (and piss off the stupid haters).
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Anonymous04/21/11
Well,well,another piece of deranged shit from gutless wimpy Pom !
It seems that citizens of this worthless nation (brits) are insistent on corrupting rest of the world to their perversion.
Apparently Adolf done a big mistake in not exterminating this boil from the face of the earth !!
English
Didn't need to read this bullshit story.
You are just another English wimp. You always will be.
Lacking
This story lacks development of both characters and events.
Your
going to get raped if you dont have the editor move this to fetish or group . You will get better ratings and we wont have this shit in our category .
Not to worry, Daniel ...
Not to worry, Daniel. The story's clearly tagged "sharing" - so anyone who objects to sharing doesn't have to read it.
I more or less agree that the story's not strong on character development, but then again, it's just not that kind of story, is it?
But it gets at least two extra "stars" in its rating just for pissing off the whiners.
There's no reason why this story shouldn't be in "Loving Wives," particularly with the tag "sharing."
There's no evidence of fetishism in it (to anyone who actually knows what a 'fetish' is) and it barely skirts the edges of "group sex." The narrator is clearly enjoying his open - and very likely quite loving - relationship with his wife, and she is enjoying their relationship, too.
If this story is going to be rated
based on whiners, then I'll have to give it two stars less to offset. Authors those admirers of yours are not doing you a favor. Tell them to voice their opinion to you and not worry about what others think. We all have our opinion and can voice it anyway we wish.
1 star.
Because WEBOTHDO gave 5 stars.
So that anonymous will understand, I'll type slowly.
This story is clearly tagged as a "sharing" story. And its title and "blurb" line both suggest that this is about couples sharing.
That does not necessarily imply fetishes, or group sex, or anything but what it is: a story about a marriage in which the LOVING wife is shared.
I'll give it five stars under my registered name AND as an "anonymous."
Wow
Why the fuck would you two be married, for a tax break? I guess this is what you do when there is no love or respect. What a turn off.
Great story, DanielUK.
Married people who find sexual adventure together will never be understood by those who prefer to cheat, or to lead lives of quiet desperation.
Hope to see more from you soon - and be sure to post it in Loving Wives, where most stories about open, sharing marriages usually are posted.
As stated.
Webothdo read the story. 1 star. Don't care where you put this shit.
Moralists on a porn story site? Seriously?
Any idiot who complains about infidelity in a sex story on a erotic story site needs to really get a life.
Dude, it's a sex site. It's the Loving Wives section. If your delicate senses are offended, go to a Christian bible story site.
I didn't like the story much, and I normally would have given it two or three stars, but because of all this nonsense I'm giving it five to equalize things (and piss off the stupid haters).
Well,well,another piece of deranged shit from gutless wimpy Pom !
It seems that citizens of this worthless nation (brits) are insistent on corrupting rest of the world to their perversion.
Apparently Adolf done a big mistake in not exterminating this boil from the face of the earth !!
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