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by champagne198210/05/07

Phew!

There's a relationship I haven't had the curtains opened on before. Nicely done, well rhymed for the most, there were a couple of forced moments, but you didn't ruin your verse completely with Yoda-speak. Thanks, I enjoyed it.

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