This year the quality of stories for Halloween has been exceptional. Most of the authors have created amazing stories - some quite scary and creepy, others sentimental, romantic and tender, so regretfully in comparison this one is just okay. Thank you for the read.
I liked how you threw lyrics to the song in here and there. One of my favorite Prince tunes and brings back lots of memories! Well done! Good luck in the contest!
English
Oooh! I get to be your first!
A nice little read, Irish! Halloween isn't always scary. I'll be humming that song all night.
Well done Ren!
A clever and believable Halloween tale. You have a flair for conversational dialogue. Good luck in the contest.
Loved the song loved your story!
I really like it Ren, I'm going to take some of what I read and apply it to my own writing style. Great job!
It was
pretty good. I did like some of the dialogue, but it seemed a bit over the top.
Good work
I liked it. A very cute well done story.
Fun
This brought back memories of my single days. Loads of fun.
not baad
ok you had an informal mood, clearly the mood of a nice one night stand.
i gather you hint no further endeavours, ah well that is Okay.
thank you for those paragraphs
Loved it
I loved it Ren. More of your classic style. Fantastic
Short and sweet
A good first story. Good luck in the contest.
Just okay
This year the quality of stories for Halloween has been exceptional. Most of the authors have created amazing stories - some quite scary and creepy, others sentimental, romantic and tender, so regretfully in comparison this one is just okay. Thank you for the read.
Nice Story
I liked how you threw lyrics to the song in here and there. One of my favorite Prince tunes and brings back lots of memories! Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Good Story
I thought your story was great. I enjoyed your personal touch. You are a good writer, friend. Keep doing it.
Olive
Sweet
Well written. Good luck in the contest.
Excellent take
Love how you've brought the song out in the story, but I suppose you know that I get a kick out of that already *laugh* Good luck in the contest!
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