All Comments on 'Toy Surprise'

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IdreamofjeanieIdreamofjeanieabout 10 years ago
Very Good

Enjoyed it! Love to try one like she did.

jeangenie3697jeangenie3697about 9 years ago
Loved it!

This story is right u my alley, and it's so well-written. I envy a couple who can be so open and fun! Great job!

Black_and_White_WriterBlack_and_White_Writeralmost 9 years ago
Joyous

It may be a short tale but boy it's very sexy. Some tales can be far too short and some can be far too long.

This tale is the perfect length and a lovely story too. I really emphasized with both Jenny and Cal.

Lovely. Please post more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Not Consistent

You said if was twelve inches, then eight, then back to twelve... wtf? Please be consistent in your lengths. Other than that, it was good

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