by Eroscribe67
Very Very sexy. Nice job. Dispite the BDSM you could feel the love from both parties. If there is any truth in this little story I hope their lives will always be like this. Enjoyed it very much.
Excellent job
And just great for a 1st submission
Your writing background shows!
I love the way she controlled him. It was so loving of her to allow him to climax eventually
I enjoyed the Point Of View of this story. I've added it to my favorites as I'm going to be using it as a POV reference for my romances in my writing log. Thanks!
Sammies_Place
Something under bdsm where someone isn't really hurting the other person and they both enjoy their time together.
Love a good descriptive story like this... so arousing, sweet love making.