All Comments on 'Winter Fires Ch. 04'

by steveh11

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
woefully bad

lowest rating possible. nothing to rave about at all. but to be fair, i'll read the other offerings too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I have

just read all four episodes of this excellent series and am really enjoying it.It is about real people in real situations Without a single mention of 36 inch cocks and treble G tits.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
First commenter couldn't be more wrong

This is a very sweet story, and I'm enjoying it very much. Who knows why the first commenter didn't like it - but ignore that remark. First of all, your writing style is clear. The story line flows naturally and realistically. I appreciate the proper use of grammar and punctuation, and correctly spelled words! That alone makes this worthy of at least a 50.<br><br>

Beyond that, as I said before, the story flows well. It's realistic, sweet, and a pleasure to read. You have also made me curious about the twin sister. Marianne seems to jump quickly into things, and then relationships burn out fast. Will that happen here as well? I'll keep reading to find out. You're doing a good job, please continue.

bornagainbornagainover 16 years ago
Great story

I liked the story it was very well written i think the sister will try to take the fireman away from her sister continue please.

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