All Comments on 'The Craving'

I can hear KD Lang's Constant Craving in my head as I read this. Very well done.

And highly erotic.

So much of the central character is compressed into just enough words.

Nicely done.

Well done!

An intrigueing plot line and story concept. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.

Interesting little narrative you got there. Very evocative. Nice imagery.

Ah, a new subject and good writing. Loved it.

Nice job!

Creepy - and brave for taking on a risky subject. The narrative actually conveys a stronger sense of darkness than the acts (if that makes any sense without spoiling the story for anyone else) Well done, and good luck in the contest!

... to an overdone genre. I love the bravery and the originality of it, as well as the twist that takes a traditional predator and removes the aspect of harm.

Though the narrative is short, the impact is strong.

I like it very much. I love the feel of it. And the emotion, and the darkness. Well written.

I was expecting something else when I began to read, but you took me to a different place. I liked your descriptions and it was an interesting read. Good luck in the contest.

This was bizzare and sortave creepy I didnt really like it sorry

Weird, creepy, wonderful. Good luck in the contest.

Oh, this is a wickedly good tale. Love the new twist.

I rarely read non-human but you said you needed the votes. I found your story very interesting. Wished it could have been longer. Good luck in the contest.

DG Hear