Not to sound as if I'm bigheaded or something, but I thought that what I attempted to write was very good. I know that there will always be critics and all, and everyone is entitled to their own opinions. Yes, I am an amateur writer, this was my first sex story.
This also was a fantasy that I had had at one time more than a decade ago. The woman that is my niece is now happily married, has her own family and lives about an hour east of me. As for the other older woman, she disappeared sometime in the late 1980's and I haven't seen or heard from her since.
English
I gave this a top score even though it was -------
a bit much--I doubt that I need to read the following chapter(s)
Obvious and amateurish
I'm just a beginner...
Not to sound as if I'm bigheaded or something, but I thought that what I attempted to write was very good. I know that there will always be critics and all, and everyone is entitled to their own opinions. Yes, I am an amateur writer, this was my first sex story.
This also was a fantasy that I had had at one time more than a decade ago. The woman that is my niece is now happily married, has her own family and lives about an hour east of me. As for the other older woman, she disappeared sometime in the late 1980's and I haven't seen or heard from her since.
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