Hookah'ed

great stuff

Oh I loved this story

What a way to go

Excellent

One of the best succubi stories I've read. Extremely good work

Fantastic story

Wow, what a novel way of smoking.

I loved the way he was suckered into their clutches, and helplessly filled with the drugged smoke before he knew what had happened.

Is this really your first story? I really hope you will write a few more like this.

I like the voice in this one - heartless and all business. That last line was a perfect closer. Good luck in the contest.

decent, but...

why must you befoul the names of such wonderful horror novelists?

It all clicked into place

I started reading
your stories in alphabetical order and I was wondering myself 4-5 paragraphs in why he would be unguarded. Then I understood what all the 'ladies' were and was laughing.