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A Stroll in the Woods

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by Anonymous10/16/07

Shallow.

Poorly written and just not worth the read. The story line is forced in directions not backed up by logic or motivation and the characters are as shallow as a mud puddle. From the punctuation errors alone, it's painfully obvious that this piece hasn't been edited. The whole effort was stillborn.

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