All Comments on 'Naughty Son'

Short highly erotic needs to come back for more, much much more where she is fully aware of what is going on?????

Excellent story. There is but one way to make it better. Repeat the same story, but instead of "you" tell it from "your" side...what you are feeling, what you are doing

Agree with first comment more needed,one of the most erotic phrases in mom/son incest is where the mother locks her legs aroung her son almost forcing him to cum deep in her. If there is a sequel and this is crying out for one , hopefully she will do just that.Its strange but a lot of women authors can really write very erotic mom/son incest ,Iwonder why

One of the best, if not the best mom/son incest stories I have ever read,agree with the others make her REALLY come to life and watch the response you get then.

Beautifully written story. You gave me an erection early in the story and I masturbated as I read the story. It felt great to accompany your wonderul words with stroking my cock. You did a great job. I orgasmed and it felt so good. Thank you very much for your help. I really enjoyed it. Please continue writing this kind of story so I can keep jacking off to your wonderful words.

This isn't a story: it's a letter to the the active figure of this "tale." He was there, so why are you telling him what he did? The way it reads, it was as if you were tell ME what I did. Well, I know I was not there doing the deeds, so spare me.

This is a very poor attempt at a first person present narrative.This piece would've have been much better if you substituted "he" and "him" for you.

Erotica written in this tense does NOT work.

The passive voice of the narrator is a real turn off also.

Last comment ,get real this is excellent,who are you to say it doesnt work,you can only speak for yourself,as you have so much to say lets see what you can do.In MY opinion this is as I say excellent.

Very good, alot of you and yours though names would be good.

Any daughters to write about.

This reminds me almost, of an adult version of those old "choose your own adventure" books I read as a kid.

that in and of itself, makes this a great read :)

I'd love to see more

Great story! I really enjoyed it--please continue it?

Keep it up gave me a hard on and thats not easy at my age

I loved it

thank you for one of the hottest story that i read

Great story! Easy to masterbate to

"first person present narrative". Um, go back to middle school: it's in 2nd person. The point of it is that the author is telling you what are you're doing.

What a great short story, continue with a second chapter please!!

His cock felt so good inside my pussy, his stokes were deep, and hard, filling me completely. I wondered if I would be able to keep quiet, making him think I was still sleeping? My question was answered quickly, as a moan escaped my lips, but it seemed to go unnoticed. My breathing became heavy once my son's speed picked up, and I could no longer keep silent. Although I wasn't loud, I couldn't help but start with uh, uh, uh, uh, uh. His thrusting became more urgent, as I could not longer pretend, I started going oh, oh, oh, oh, oh. My sounds only encouraged the assault on my pussy, and I became even more vocal. "Oh yes, oh yes, that's so good, oh god honey," I heard myself crying out! Then it happened, as my orgasm approached, I began shouting sexual phrases of pleasure. "Oh god honey, oh god yes, just like that, oh that's so good," I exclaimed! "Oh yes, oh honey, I'm going to cum, oh honey, oh honey, oh yes, oh yes, oh god, oh god, fuck me, fuck me," I screamed!!! Then I felt my son's cum shooting against my cervix, and I came again, even harder than I just had!!!

My son gave me sleeping pills one day,then he abused my wet mommy pussy with his 16 year old cock,he fucked me so long and hard my pussy was sore when I woke up,dam I need that again