All Comments on 'A Tale of Keisha'

This is a very good opening to what should be a very interesting story. A very bad husband is going to "get his".

The possibilities are almost endless for where this could go.

Easy reading...this sounds almost to good to be true. Please use the same level of details and pause point for the next few chapters.

Keep going with this story please - would love to see him get his...

BTW - is Mistress Keisha available? I have another no-good little worm for her to deal with! lol...

Fantastic opening to what I hope will become an equally fantastic story.

I particularly like the fact that Joanne is aroused by her husbands submission. It is almost like she is discovering herself. I am left wondering if Jerry is also about to experience some self discovery. Perhaps his deepest fantasies are about to be fulfilled.

Thanks for a great read!!!

Well written and cohesive start to what I'm hoping is an ongoing femdom tale. Looking forward to your next installment.

Ok.. I'm definately hooked and hope that there is going to a conclusion to this story!!

And realized what was going on. He packed and took every available liquid asset and no one ever saw him again. I'm SO glad you never finished this. It was terrible.

Laughably bad