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Something Seductive in that State

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone10/13/07

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as a suggestion you should try stanza breaks, I don't ever remember you using them. See what happens.

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by bluebell10/14/07

Utterly delicious!

What a fantastically compact and potent poem. I enjoyed everything about it and am inclined to disagree with twelve (sorry) about the stanzas. I think the breaks are perfect- they add terrifically to the flow of the poem. It becomes the very thought you wanted to capture. Well done.

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