by policywank
I really enjoyed this! It's an exciting vivid fantasy! Great job!
Think you missed a chance to inject a closing "twist" that would give rise to a believable series -
[a] perhaps have her at home later making dinner when her husband arrives. While kissing hello, he whispers a compliment on her first-time role-playing performance in HIS office... to which she replies - "I sure hope your next email scenario is just as exciting! What a wonderful way to earn some spending money."
[b] maybe have her arrive home where an either clueless or even knowingly cucked husband greets her with, "How was your day?" to which she replies, "Sit down, dear, I believe it's time I tell you exactly how one of my days went."
Yes, I know there's a Part 2. Gave the second chapter 1-star for being a huge disappointment, aside from the erotic bit about attaching jewelry and parading her out into the fundraiser wearing only what she had on and presenting her as his muse... THAT had possibilities.