All Comments on 'And This Is What Happens'

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tickledkittytickledkittyover 16 years ago
Bluey, darling...

This is wonderful and sad and beautiful. Such a gift you have. Please write more.

rootsfanrootsfanover 16 years ago
Gorgeous...

heartbreaking, and deeply felt, just as I'd expect. Please write more, you truly are an excellent writer.

maggot420maggot420about 16 years ago
Wonderful

I really like this. You have an expansive talent. Beautifully written.

jomarjomarabout 16 years ago
I agree fully with the other commentors.

I read a post on the blurt or Dear X thread and couldn't help thinking of that when I read your poem.

KOLKOREKOLKOREabout 16 years ago
When the pain is like spitted blood

The pain comes out harsh and clear as if you were spitting blood. It's painful to read. Yet, the heart goes out, and the lyrical expression so raw, but one can't avert one's eyes. It could not be easy to wear one's heart on one's sleeve like that. As for the talent, that's between the very generous creator of you and you...

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