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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/19/07

Reads like a poem

It just doesn't read like a story for me to enjoy it. Sorry, but I don't like poems.

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by glynndah10/23/07

A suggestion of a story...

I was left with many questions, the way ghost stories often are.

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by Anonymous10/24/07

Nice try, but...

You're trying too hard to paint imagery without coherence--connecting a few dots does not always make a whole picture.

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