All Comments on 'Trick or Treat'

He can't possibly cum that often in that short a time.

Sorry

I enjoyed a lot of the story, but...I suggest you maybe read 2 or 3 stories about anal sex before you write another description of it? Or, maybe, try it on yourself, to see how it might work? You really lost me when you wrote that bit!

Also..."Mature" is not the category for 2 high-school age kids getting it on.

Otherwise, not a bad start, keep on writing, and reading others' examples!

sadly, it's not extremely common. A horny young 18-year old guy is certainly likely to be able to rise to the occasion more than once or twice in a night. However, there is usually at least some time required between episodes. <br><br>

As to the anal sex scene, this is a good example of why it works best to stick to describing what you know. If indeed a man slammed his dick into a woman's ass with absolutely zero preparation, it would hurt like hell. Even when lubrication, it is still something that needs to be approached with patience -- i.e., no slamming in all the way on the first try. A little reseach, such as a trip to the How To category right here on Literotica, would have provided you with lots of information that would have helped you to write a more believable anal scene. The fact that you didn't take the time is telling the reader that you didn't care enough about your story (or your readers) to do so.<br><br>

The story was a quick stroke. It had its hot moments. If this is one of your early attempts, I would say you have lots of potential. Writing is a craft, and writing well takes effort, practice, skill, and either actual knowledge or research.

I just wanted to chime in. I'm a guy, I'm 20, and the only thing that really stops me from going again is at the point where I get sore. I'm not bragging (far from it, it's a little bit of a problem sometimes), I'm just saying it's not totally impossible for a guy to go multiple times in one sitting. I don't get soft in between, although my orgasms DO come further and further part every time, which isn't necessarily a bad thing.

Very hot story. I really liked the sex scenes although the dialogue between the charactesr was a little cheesy.

A guy can cum that many times in a short amount of time. I know this guy who can and he isn't small at all. : ) I loved this story VERY HOT

No, seriously...unbelievable. Sounds like some boys got a wank out of it, though, so there's something.