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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/15/07

keep writing !

This is great. I'd keep reading. I like how you break the erotic vein abruptly, & draw readers into a real suspense story (keep us waiting for more of the hot sex!)

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by madengineer310/15/07

Very Nice!

This is an excellent erotic horror story. It is nice seeing "poetic justice" at work. The hanging ending is a wonderful approach.

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by 10/15/07

Wow

I like it. Very appropriate.

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by jonmartin2209/25/11

wahoo!

Nice one Mr Words! I look forward to the next bit.

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