is a timeless classic, but be careful you don't make Harriet too unlikeable to redeem. A little haughtiness is fine, but is there something to admire underneath that? If so, then your story will definitely be interesting to read.
But a good start. I'm anxious to see where you take this story.
I love this story, plaese continue this story, i seriously wnat to find out wat is happening and between this characters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
She's so mean! I'm sure that you have her comeupence all planned. Very Good. Short, but good. Do hope that you continue.
This is such a good story and so true. pleas finish it pleas..she doesnt deserve to treat her ladies maid that way. come on pleas!!
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The Taming of the Shrew
is a timeless classic, but be careful you don't make Harriet too unlikeable to redeem. A little haughtiness is fine, but is there something to admire underneath that? If so, then your story will definitely be interesting to read.
A bit short...
But a good start. I'm anxious to see where you take this story.
DAMN!
I love this story, plaese continue this story, i seriously wnat to find out wat is happening and between this characters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Will You Finish?
She's so mean! I'm sure that you have her comeupence all planned. Very Good. Short, but good. Do hope that you continue.
You need to finish!! pleas!!
This is such a good story and so true. pleas finish it pleas..she doesnt deserve to treat her ladies maid that way. come on pleas!!
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