homeBDSMPaying the PricePublic Comments

All Comments  for

Paying the Price

bylumi©
All
Comments (2)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous10/20/07

Just another CONTROL FREAK tale

Sure to be loved by other control freaks

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Ton8ty10/20/07

Very Nicely Done

This vanilla, hetero male thought that you did an excellent job of relating a believable tale of RACK. Your characters were well developed and believable, your prose and usage very professional and the pace of the story was exactly right. I, for one, would like to see more of your talented writing.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Paying the Price  or
More submissions by lumi.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel