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Slut For Pregnant Women

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by Anonymous10/21/07

Like the fetish, story needs a little work

The idea that she got fired because she was pregnant yet working for a firm that sold contraceptives, was just too unlikely a scenario. It's like being fired from your job with a wine distributor because you were seen drinking beer after hours. It doesn't make sense and detracts from your story.
A little oops to clean up, is the part involving the waiter/waitress. He's male when he brings the food to your table.
The waiter who brought it over glanced at me knowingly, then reached under the table as if to pick something up and, I found out later, pinched her nipples quickly but quite harshly.
Then he undergoes the world's fastest sex change:
As she walked away, her blonde flowing hair cascading down her back, I watched as she licked a few droplets of mother's milk from her fingertips. Good Lord it was so hot knowing that another woman, a gorgeous, sexy woman, knew what was going on and loved it.
The best parts were where you talked about your fetish, what turned you on about pregnant women, what you wanted to do, etc.

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by devad76107/27/15

problems

If only I had this guys problems, I could die happy!!

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