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by WickedEve10/16/07

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How nice to see your name and poetry! The last two stanzas, wonderful. Red riding is dark and damp and ripe, and mama is in the kitchen, clean and white. Love the colors and the contrast.

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by LeBroz10/16/07

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This poem was mentioned in Tuesday's New Poems Reviews.


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