by Munachi
I wonderful little story, simple, yet very imaginative and haunting. Well done! Good luck in the contest.
Your stories are always worth waiting for, Munachi. Loved it.
Your stories always get me. It was clean, simple, beautiful, and haunting. Good luck in the contest.
I enjoy reading your work - it is always atmospheric and dark. This was particularly bleak, but well written as ever. Good luck.
and creepy and certainly different. I have to wonder, though, why Michael didn't just run into the water, once he saw he would not be able to put out the fire.
Your characterizations and insight are always incredible, Munachi. You bring us into the mind of the narrator like no one else.
I'm not a big fan of sad endings to a romance piece, but I found that this story was definitely a good read. I enjoyed it very much.