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A lifetime in a moment

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by Anonymous

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by hippiedude10/18/07

nice idea

yeah i like the idea of this

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by Anonymous10/21/07

Hot and Sweet

Your poem manages to be erotic and tender at the same time. A great combo!

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genuinely sweet

I really like the sincere affection I can read in this piece. Not everybody's a 21 year old supermodel *grin* and yet there is still great beauty in these acts. Thanks.

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by WhiteWave4801/01/08

Complex but with a tender simplicity

You have cleverly constructed an intricate erotic picture here, and all within the limited confines of a poem. The complex relationships between your people reflect their life experiences with an unexpected tenderness as the poem reaches its conclusion.

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by tazz31706/06/12

AND EVER SO THANKFUL

she is not a widow, TK U MLJ LV NV

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