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by hippiedude10/18/07

few words

i like the economy of words here

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by KOLKORE06/13/08

What a rhythm!

I am going to try your technique...I mean, in writing this poem of course! It works wonderfully,as it gets you into this simple: one-two-three rhytm which of course becomes stronger as we progress to the...end.

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