by acdd123
I mean... damn. This was shit. Badly-written shit, at that.
Minimum Standards should be applied to be published here. If so, this character's stuff would be removed immediately.
Benard knows, he's hired me to take care of Polly. I'm going to tie her to a tree and skin her alive, making her pray for death. but I'm good at my craft, she will not die quickly. When I'm finished, I'll set the near dead body on fire. Benard is not happy, Polly will die badly. Whore beware. The blade is at work.
Enjoyed that alot! I disagree with the person who commented that Bernard obviously knows -- whether he does or doesn't is more or less irrelevant; the fact is he's a wimp who wouldn't do anything about it even if he DID know. In fact it might be fun to have Lance fuck Polly in front of him, taunting him while fucking her in places he could never reach. That would be hot.
Keep up the good work and ignore all the mean comments!
Sweet stuff. Ignore the person who fails to realize that this is erotic literature of a sexual and adult nature. Please do more stories.
Great work I haven't read a story like this in a long time. One suggestion would be keep going with the chapters and be more descriptive with what the characters are wearing.
This is one of the best stories I have read in a long time. Need more sequels and keep it up.
are? This had to be written by a virgin below age 15 male high on hormones. It is far to immature for an adult, even a retarded one, to have written.