by MungoParkIII
AS far as I am concerned you are the author of the moment,this is a brilliant series,I do hope you keep it going.The alternative is Holly and her s//,now that really would be something.One final thing ,every now and again an author with real talent emerges on this site,you are such a person.
This is a great series. I really hope you continue it some how. I would love to see Holly and her brother get back together again.
This has been an excellent series,if you are testing the temperature of the water for further escapades for Holly the water is fine,you have the son now as well as her brother.Its only my opinion,but if you do go on I hope you avoid a threesome.[YOU COULD ALWAYS GIVE US A CLUE,YOU HAVE PLENTY OF FANS]
There is a saying as one door closes another opens I have a feeling it might be the same door in this case.The stage is set the cast are ready your audience waits with baited breath.You really are a very talented master of the erotic,I like the way you tell a story without resorting to silly filth.
I loved all the other installments of this story, yet today when I started reading and got to the part where Ricky had been in prison I stoppped!
Maybe it get good but I'll never know because you ruined it!
I don't want to read about his hardships and bad prison tattos! I want to read about this pair working out their relationship. And again, maybe they do but I won't read it!
RE-WRITE this last chapter!
Take no notice of the last comment ,they are of limited cerebral effort,Holly will almost certainly have loving intercourse with her son if I am not mistaken.I know that you understand the deep love that goes with true incest,and you handle it so very well.
I read your profile now I know why you can write such lovely stories,you have my admiration for being so honest,not only that what a lovely erotic series,I do hope you can find some way to keep it going,
Agreat series ,hope you are considering furthur adventures for Holly.
good series until this crap if you had left out the prison shit and had rick move back to be with his sister you might have saved it but as is not worth the time it took to read it
the series was great untill the end was ruined it was a terrible way to finish things and unless u plan to make a followup SERIES to the end of the chapter it was dreatful but if u plan to then it was amazing
Would have been better if got out of prison and went home to Holly to find out about son and then they lived together after son went to college and told him later on.
I could see where this was going but it was a pleasant trip just the same. Some of the wording wasn't correct but as one reads substituting is no problem it filled a couple of hours pleasantly enough.