Well done, that was a very good story. Very interesting p.o.v, not quite first or second person. Made it very personal to the reader which was great. Just a few wrong words, it's only a proof-reading away from being absolutely excellent.
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Anonymous06/29/09
What about me
Like the way you look,like to push my cock into female holes,all male and by the sounds of things your arse could be made for my cock.Want to find out, do as your told and leave me a message here where everyone can see it.
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Anonymous01/03/10
husband?
good story. exactly the right length, maybe a little more detail on the penetration would be nice...as well as proofreading.
also was the bloke her husband/partner???? ( i am referencing the last line.)
English
good story
good story,it keep my thinking, but I think a little proof reading will help next time.
Good story
Well done, that was a very good story. Very interesting p.o.v, not quite first or second person. Made it very personal to the reader which was great. Just a few wrong words, it's only a proof-reading away from being absolutely excellent.
What about me
Like the way you look,like to push my cock into female holes,all male and by the sounds of things your arse could be made for my cock.Want to find out, do as your told and leave me a message here where everyone can see it.
husband?
good story. exactly the right length, maybe a little more detail on the penetration would be nice...as well as proofreading.
also was the bloke her husband/partner???? ( i am referencing the last line.)
your good
you seem to be a woman who knows what she wants and how to get
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