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My Mother in Law Usha

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/31/07

A little

Story line is good but needs to fire and passion.

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by Anonymous10/31/07

More

Get into it more. Make this a series.

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by Anonymous11/01/07

Well,

The storyline is good and you have talent in telling story, but your command of the language is so poor that it fails to deliver the stuffs that you want to present.

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by EmmSea11/01/07

Ugly!!

I read the first two paras. Poorly written and in the wrong category (should be in NonConsent/Reluctance), it was rape.

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by Anonymous11/01/07

Good

Good. Excellent story line. Need editing. Watching for next episode.

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