All Comments on 'Faithfulness and'

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...but what's the POINT? All it does is raise questions which cannot be answered. Is this an intro to a larger story? Or was it just something to amuse yourself with.

a totally stupid story a waste of time reading it don't submit any more trash like this crap!

Maybe the author will be so kind as to explain this story because I have no clue what this story is about. It seems the author wrote this little piece for his own enjoyment.

Author pissed perhaps ? Stay sober before you write

I must have ther wierd brain, I think I understood it and liked it. " Duty is a heavy load. death a feather" A majority of one.

Absolutely devoid of substance!

Someone needs to review these stories BEFORE posting them.

of the story titled Faithfulness showing a different side of a supposed villian.

I guess this is what is called artsy-fartsy. It is irrelevant at best enjoyable zero. I hope the author enjoyed this whatever meandering deepness of thought.

I read this first and didn't rate it. Then I realized there was a part one and read it. Read this again and quite good.

Well done. I hope you continue your plan and flesh out the full story.

Due to no fault of mine (some accidental reading list) I happened on this story first. Truth to be told, no standard indication was tanywhere to be found ("Chapter 2" might have looked much less original but at the same time much clearer to most...). So, I will go back to chapter one, then if nothing really bad happens (based on past experiences it's highly unlikely) Finally, I'll move to chapter three...Please don't do this to me again!

Ok, yes, the story. It was nice. Like a very stylized film with a lot of attention to details and atmosphere. But the substance and the plot...-Eh, so so. A bit stereotipical for me (the butler and the lady and all that), a bit too much deja- vu for me. Still, I promise - if I come back from chapter one a changed man, I'll confess the sins of this feedback and correct my ways!

dead husband is victim of slut wife his brother and driver. that pretty much says it all

But I still think she is a slut.

reamed by a hard cock, his cornhole wide open, betrayed!

a necro-slut sans emotions. TK U MLJ LV NV

That is a new low for LW. Don't think I've seen anyone have sex with a corpse.

Feminists Unite!