What Do I Do Now?

Style over substance

I did not like the STYLE of the writing. The italicized asides broke into the narrative flow and seemed a rather obvious discussion of the things we had already been adequately SHOWN in the story.

I am not a moron and didn't need someone to lead me by the hand to the conclusion.

This I, of course, only an opinion. Thought the STORY was cute.

I would like to see this get finished

ONCE AGAIN A DILEMNA

how does one believe their lying eyes. TK U MLJ LV NV

Predictable,

but very well done. I, too, would like to see a sequel.

Not too bad

This was a pretty good story.Then again most of your stories are. BUUUUT it would be really nice if you could sit down and write a sequel to this one. I'm sure you could, and this story left you a lot of room to make it one hell of sequel. But as it stands I feel that it rates at least four stars. I am hoping that you do write a sequel though. nice story though.

This looks like a job for FTDS!

Call Out!

yes phil .... FTDS

FTDS .........FTDS.........FTDS

Second time around

After reading this again, it sort of pissed me off that you didn't write a sequel to it. that's a damn shame. well I guess FTDS needs to have to write one for you. Well it isn't the first time that he had to finish off someone else's story. That sucks for you. You have the talent to do it yourself but I guess you just got lazy such a waste of a good story.

I think it a fine...

..way to end it. Not all need to have a package wrapped and tied with a bow!

Entertaining

But really would have liked more.

Would love to see how it played out with the stupid bitch.

She easily could have contracted a STD as well.

Needs a conclusion

Story is unfinished. With the multitude of directions this could go I think this was a terrible place to leave the story. In some cases I think this could have been a fitting ending, but the only character that had any development was Angie so inference about the aftermath and how they worked through it is wide open. I've seen this a lot and most times its this open (and in some cases even when it isn't) there's been an invitation to continue the story...?

Very JPBesque

It's a good story, for what is written. The sudden ending reminds me of JPB's stories. If you are not going to continue it, would you be willing to let others give it a try?

She's history

Yes, a Eulogy would be nice. But cutting him off for over a year and then jumping his bones to multiple times a week?!?! The vid will fit into what he will NOW consider as guilt fucks in the past few weeks. Going from nothing to over the top - ya sure he will believe her lame excuse of assumptions. And she might now be knocked up.

And she is now formally a "cheater" - toss her ass. If for no other reason for being overly stupid in thinking she had all the answers! Hell she knew her daughter wore the same lipstick color. Her root problem is she decided to not trust him - to many soaps and not enough smarts.