All Comments on 'Loves Older Women'

A very good story ,but sons do not fuck their mothers they make love with them.

a potentially good story spoiled by very bad spelling and the the phrase your much bigger than my husband!!!

Agree with the other comments,I did not have a sexual relationship with my mother althoigh I wanted to and so did she,I would not have used the word fuck .

I liked this a great deal,women authors seem to handle this subject very well,it does need a little attention but not much.I hope to read more from you on mother /son relationships

A top vote for a nicely written story. Could you have been one of the young man's "customers"? I enjoyed both of your stories, you write very well from either gender view point. Being an older man who enjoys giving oral pleasure to willing, desiring women, a pleasure to find other men who feel the same. I would love to read some "true" stories from your life. Or, confirm that these are from your memories and not your fantasy mind. A bit more length to give me time to stroke off the hard on you give me would be nice. Thank you. Richard

Sable I will let you into a little secret most virile young men prefer older women ,its got something to do with our evolution where the young male competes with the older one for the dominant male position.You write a good story which needs just a little attention.I am sure we will be reading more from you hopefully on the same subject.

Strange isnt it the young of both genders often prefer sex partners often much older than them,equally odd is how mature women seem to go sex mad [I am pleased to say]as they approach 40 .I will never see 40 again,but had a great time with mature women in my early 20,s . The story has an element of "experience "in it,thats why it is so erotic.

This is well written and well organized. However, you need an editor, you're missing easy things.

which I really enjoyed despite all the spelling mistakes - you need to check those - I have always loved older women right from my first fuck and found them to be great lovers and teachers about their sexual needs - especially if they were married and no longer being satisfied. Older women never tell - they just come back for more - don't you just love them.

I hate to pile on but.....while an editor might be desired, I am of the opinion that a slowwwwww reread by you, would find almost all errors.

None the less...keep on writing, please.

Thanks Don

You really, really need to learn to spell your words better. It takes away from the story and is grating on the senses. Other than that Mrs Linclon, the play was interesting.

DJS

Great story.....I crave the older ladies and have all of my life.......and at 62, I still crave the older gals.....I just love their bodies.....love their attitudes.......I just love the older gals......and no sweet ladies, you are never too old to be wanted and desired....I look everyday for an older gal who wants a guy to adore and love them.....smile girls.....I am looking for you......

I appreciate your writting abilities........made me relive many moments in my life.....great job......more

The son says, "My cock head went into my mother's pussy as easy as if it were made for it." I got news for you, kid. Your cock was made to get up that cunt, up to your balls. Nothing can ever feel as comfy and cosy, as warm and loving, just so damn right to a boy's cock as his own mother's cunt.

you need a better prof reader!

loved hope there is more 1,2,3,

VERY DIFFERENT AND VERY GOOD...

Excellent storyline but spoilt by mis-spellings & the lack of a good editor. Too many "I"'s where there shouldn't be, lack of necessary commas, plus storyline raced too fast in some place's where a bit more explanations could have improved it immensely.