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A Creamy Birthday Present

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by Anonymous10/26/07

me 2

i 2 love to teaze my hubby i have never had the nerve i get wet thing about it and have to masterbate every time norma

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by Anonymous10/26/07

Very Nice! Loved it!

My husband and I fantasize about this too! Very nice job! I loved how you developed the story! Please do more like this one!

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by Anonymous10/26/07

Pretty Good

A very hot story from beginning to end. The part about Alan being a cum licker was a downer for me; but the rest of the tale was wild and wonderful. Thanks. Ron

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by Anonymous10/27/07

I'd have given it a 10

Great...along the lines of a personal fantasy, so I really enjoyed it.

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by Mr. Briggs10/27/07

FANTASTIC

Awesome story as always. thanks for writing it

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by Anonymous10/29/07

Great Fantasy!

Wow! Very hot! I've shared this fantasy with Tanya many times - I'd love for someone to fill her sweet cunt with a big load of cum (but I'd rather watch or join in - then lick her pussy clean!)
Thanks for writing!
Nick and Tanya

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by Anonymous11/15/07

My fantasy

A great story - how I wished I was Alan cleaning your sexed pussy. If only I could persuade my wife to do the same.

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by Anonymous02/20/08

i love to this feel yr wife full of cum

what a great story like to try this myself.

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by Anonymous08/03/08

Her fantasy, I "WISH"

My wife works night at a care center and I have expressed to her numerous times about her having an affair with another man. She told me that would never happen, but we both live this fantasy every time we enjoy "mutual masturbation"! I tell her I think about her at work in the early morning hours and a gentleman approaches her and they sit across on separate couchs and converse. After a short time, they engage in masturbation! She tells me how she watches him jack-off his hard cock. She touches her pussy and tells the man how she enjoys watching a man stroke his dick. He asks her to show him her pussy and she obliges and spreads open for him and after watching him for a while, plunges two fingers in her dripping pussy and screams at him to "JACK-OFF! She told me she told him to "stroke his hard cock and pump that juice out" so she could see it

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by Anonymous10/08/08

Yum!!

God this story is so hot I could the cum !

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by Anonymous10/25/08

It's HOT!

My married girl friend used to go home after we'd be fucking for hours and let her hubby lick her swollen, oozing cunt. The mere thought of it would get me hard. I loved the idea of making a batch of semen in my prostate, flavored with sperm from my heavy testicles and spiced with testerone. I would pump it into Elaine's eager pussy while she climaxed then send her on home. I'd have her call me up while he was eating her and tell me how it was going.

Of course, later on, we fucked in front of him. His favorite position was to have his head between Elaine's legs sucking her clit while I fucked her. Every now and then I would be overly excited from feeling my balls dragging over his face and in my frenzy, my dick would slip out her and thrust down his throat...LOL IT WAS FUN FOR SURE...LOL!!

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by SarahCornwall10/30/08

Brilliant

A great fantasy and well written!

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by Anonymous04/20/09

Magnificent

You've written a classic of erotica. Congratulations - it's good to read a scalding hot story free of abusive actions or attitudes, in fact containing characters who are sensitive to each other's feelings. And it happens to follow a script that is one of my blue ribbon sexual fantasies (and - lucky me - realities a few times). Pieater

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by XXNoraJeanXX06/05/09

Very Well Done :)

Very well done. I loved it. :)

Thank you!!

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by penandpaper07/15/09

Great Story

This is excellent. The fantasy and characters are great; however, I would like to give one suggestion: when the women are talkin in the beginning it would be more natural to leave out the explitives. No woman I've ever known says things to her friend such as, "In my hot creamy cunt." Best to slim it down and have it more natural sounding. Other than that - perfect read.

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by Anonymous08/05/09

Hot as Hell!

A great story, well thought out, well written and scorching hot. I will print it off so my wife can read it when I next lick her out, I guarantee we will both have reason to thank you. Hope there is a sequel?

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by Vagabondx08/13/09

GREAT STORY

hope you have some others like it!

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by Anonymous10/03/09

I can dream

Awesome story...wish my wife would give me such a present

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by Anonymous04/06/10

My fantasy exactly!

I would love to have a strapping young man fuck my wife and leave her with a large creampie for me to lap up.

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by AMRJRBRIG08/08/10

Creampie

I'll never forget the first time my wife brought home a creampie. It was awesome! I had talked about her screwing another man on a few ocassions but she wasn't interested. She had always been a little reserved when it came to sex. Anyway, one night she went out with a girlfriend and was kind of drunk when she got home. I gave her a little hug and kiss and slid my hands up under her dress and started rubbing her ass. I then slid my hand into her panties and was completely shocked. Her panties were thoroughly soaked and sticky and so was her pussy. It was obvious that it was cum. As I looked her in the eyes she smiled and said she decided to take me up on my suggestion. When we got into bed I was so aroused I could not resist going down on her. There was some cum still oozing out of her hole as I licked and sucked her pussy. It was awesome. There was something special about licking another man's cum from my wife's pussy. She now fuckes other guys often and usually brings me home a treat.

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by Anonymous10/21/10

Creampie Reward

I love to take the creampies from my wife's pussy. Usually I will go out and find a cock for her to fuck while I watch and jack off. Some times I suck the guy before I bring him home and will suck him to get him hard when I introduce him at whatever location we have chosen for the three way event. I get down very close so I can watch his cock pounding her cunt hole, knowing that shortly I can suck his cum out of her pussy. We have done as many as six cocks in one night and that still wasn't enough for either of us. She loves to call me names such as cum slut, whore, queer, etc while I suck her clean. She has never gone out on her own to find meat for her hole. That's my job and I love it. We usually don't do the same guy more than two or three times. She likes the different cocks in her, with varing shapes and sizes. I sometimes suck off 4 or 5 guys until I find the right one for us. She likes for me to tell her about the night of searching and what I had to do to find the right one. I have, on occasion, had them to fuck my asspussy as a part of the selection process as she likes to see the cum running out of my ass.

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by Anonymous04/14/11

FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCKITY FUCK FUCK FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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by wylderos10/17/11

Excellent story!

This is so well written! The characters are well drawn, even though I would like to hear more about the young couple, but the narrator is a treat, as is her husband. It's almost as if Miss Marple's sister Bridgette wrote it down for us; the erotic moment so well fulfilled, I truly wished I could be Alan for an hour and be immersed in the erotic moment. Well done! I'd love to hear more of Bridgette's adventures!

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by Anonymous10/29/11

another creampie lover

Found your story very exciting and look forward to more of the same. As a creampie lover myself I fully understand the desires of the husband. The main difference between this couple and my situation is that I find the guys to fuck my wife, bring them home with me, blow them to get them hard,and guide their cocks into her pussy. I then watch the action just waiting for the creampie to be finished, then the good times begin. Sucking her pussy full of cum from another man is the greatest pleasure I can think of. The only thing better is for us to do gangbangs so that I can really get the cream. We are deeply in love with each other and see this as a valuable part of our relationship.

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by RyeandGingerAyle12/12/12

Just reread this for the umpteenth time...

...and it's just as hot as ever. What a classic.

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by Anonymous03/15/13

Not a fool.

Doesn't really like anything about it. Enjoy your divorce you earned it.

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by OOAA08/29/13

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

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by Anonymous11/10/13

Utter garbage !

This vile and deranged perversion is typical of British writers. Just give them all a 1* and be done.

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by Mefish3512/18/13

I really enjoyed this story,great fantasy. Well written. I am going to check out your other stories.

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by shang4004/16/14

love of real wife

A wife who gives you best in home and specially in bed, the love of making you proud with her skills.
Her best love is to fulfill your fantasy of creampie night.
I am also a Lucky husband who gets creamy pussy of wife filled by her lover on weekend and during week she fucks only me.
Recently she surprised me with thick sperm filled cunt, ya filled by her own father.
and one occasion he took her anal cherry and I cleaned the salty mess.

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by Anonymous05/09/15

Wonderful!

My fantasy as well. To have my 57 y/o, wife, 44EEE natural boobs, plump body, mommy belly, fat ass, tight hairy pussy, get slowly fucked by another man & come home to me. Or better yet, let me watch them fucking & him cumming in her, after she cums. Great story. My wife deserves a real cock, she has only been with me & mine is only 4" hard.

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by Anonymous06/25/15

The next phase?

What about Darren coming over on his own to get more tastes of Brigitte without telling his wife? Would Alan start to notice love bite calling cards?

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by Anonymous09/25/15

wish you were my wife.

I've wanted to eat others men's come from my wife's for year's, I also have a fantasy about a husband coming up his wife's then asking me to lick her out , there's not a woman's that I wouldn't do it to, am I normal, but licking a creamy from any woman then her weeing down my throat. Yummy. Anyone interested.

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by Photo_GW03/01/16

It's a fetish story...

People with a problem about this story - get over it. This is a fetish fantasy story. Seriously.
This was a fun, real feeling story. I like cream pies, but my own. Licking them out of my wife's pussy is something that really turns me on. Now, if I could get her to then share it with me it would be crazy!

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by Anonymous03/01/16

Wow what a great story, made me so hard reading it. I would love to experience this. Just to get my girlfriend to let lick my own cum out of her pussy would be a start!

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by Upskirter6907/09/16

Classic

One of best stories on Literotica. I got so excited, I ate my own cum!

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by badsmell007/12/16

Love the taste of sperm

I too ate my own load of cum after reading this story. I have always wanted to eat it out of my wife!

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by Anonymous10/08/16

other mens wife's also.

Not only do I want to eat other men's creamie from my wife I also want to eat creamie from other women pussies after there husbands have come , I love the idea of about 6 or more men coming up my wife then she sits over my mouth letting it all drop into my waiting mouth . Any couples interested in having a good time then letting a stranger clean it all out with his tongue then I am waiting.

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by smcock11/26/16

another mans cum

story was little long but I enjoyed master-bating to it. would love it if my wife did the same.

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by Anonymous02/28/17

Excellent

Enjoyed the story. I look forward to reading more of your work for sure.

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