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Kate the Kid Ch. 05

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by Anonymous10/28/07

My favorite

Of all the stories you have up now, this one is definately my favorite. I can't wait to see how it develops and ends.

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by Anonymous10/28/07

awesome!

Great story! one of my favorites Cant wait for the next chapter!

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by sharona10/28/07

Love it!

Another great chapter. This is a great story and I look forward to reading more!

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by michchick9810/28/07

Worth it.

Another excellent chapter. Worth the wait.

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by Anonymous10/28/07

Fabulous!!!

Kate rocks!!! This is one of the better storylines I've read on Literotica. A really good plot, interesting characters, great sex, and mysteries to keep us intrigued. Thanks for another fabulous chapter.

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by NorCalGirl10/28/07

Ah, she's no Kid anymore!

The way you describe Rafe makes my mouth water. You know, that man won't be satisfied with only one time. I appreciated that you kept it real, with her not reaching a second orgasm when he was inside her. Being a virgin, him not lasting long -- it was very natural that she didn't hit it a second time.Great update and I can't wait to see what happens next!

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by Anonymous10/28/07

Next chapter!

I can't wait for the next chapter! I love your writing, as usual, but need to get the 'emotional' side of Kate after that last scene. Please write the next chapter soon!

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by Anonymous10/29/07

Can't wait til the next chapter!

You sure know how to keep your readers wanting to more! Loved it and looking forward to what happens next between these two.

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by Anonymous10/29/07

wow, this is an amazing story

I hope you get a chance to post again soon, these characters come alive with your words!

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by Anonymous10/30/07

Finally!

Been waiting sooo long for this chapter to come out but it was sooo worth the wait! Now I can't wait for the next chapter! This is just WONDERFUL!

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by Anonymous11/24/07

LOVE it!!!

This story is sooooo good. You go into such detail on the characters! Definitely one of the better written stories on this site. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. More and more, please!

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by Anonymous12/19/07

wow really amazing story

I love the story line and I really really hope you continue it like now:P..please do keep adding chapters..it can't just end..

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