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Ioan Gruffudd Ch. 09

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by NorCalGirl10/26/07

Jumping up and down!

Yeah, I'm a total sucker for a happy ending. My only suggestion, given humbly, is that perhaps there could have been some foreshadowing of her twin? Not sure how. Then again, maybe not. We all have our secrets, some big, some small. It did explain why she was so secretive about her identity, and also her "aloneness." It might have been interesting to have a story within a story -- her latest work shared with the reader, a bit here and a bit there, providing clues for those looking for them, of her inner demons.
I really enjoyed this entire story. Thank you!

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by Marquesa3610/26/07

It Was Good

It was good but I am afraid that anyone reading this would not get a real sense of the characters like we did at the beginning. In other words, I don't think that the chapter can stand on its own or encourage someone to go back to read from the beginning of the series. As a whole though, the series was very enjoyable.

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by Anonymous10/26/07

RIGHTEOUS!

And an era comes to an end. *sigh* Fantastic!

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by jessica00710/27/07

wow...

I've been reading this story since the first chapter and I have got to say that this was one of the best stories I've read on this site. And I'm SO not into bondage or S/M. I really liked this though. Thank you for sharing your talents and please continue to finish all of your stories on such a good note.

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by Anonymous10/30/07

Wonderful!

Found this story and had to read it from start to finish in one sitting. Loved the characters especially Ioan, such a hot, sexy lead. I also loved the d/s element between them - made it much more interesting and erotic.

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Loved it!!

Fantastic story!! Really well written. My only complaint is one of continuity for this last chapter. The twin thing really came out of left field, and in previous chapters you'd said that Eric had left her at the alter for her maid of honor, as well as hinting to her having been sexually abused as a child (the scar tissue). I was really hoping that you'd explain those details at the end. Otherwise fabulous story, I look forward to whatever you're working on next!

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by _Adriana_10/14/08

Loved it

Thanks I always enjoy the power games in all your stories.

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by _Adriana_10/14/08

Loved it

Thanks I always enjoy the power games in all your stories.

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by Anonymous04/23/09

OUTSTANDING!!!

Really wonderful piece of erotica. One of my new favorites. Had me day-dreaming for days. Smart, hot writing not only leads one to fantasize, it inspires the reader without insulting their intelligence. Please keep up the brilliant work!

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