Stop the insanity.
Why would someone give you a zero score because they don't like First Person writing? The zero reflects their inability to place themselves in the story and not the quality of the writing. PW
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Wonderful! Vet erotic............keep up the good
First Person, Present Tense Writing Sucks
Stop the insanity.
Nice-forget the crayon wielder
Why would someone give you a zero score because they don't like First Person writing?
The zero reflects their inability to place themselves in the story and not the quality of the writing. PW
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More submissions by lars_sunshine.