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She is forty and she wants kids?
Um...she is at LEAST 40 years old.
Her chances of miscarriage is at least 1 in 4. And she wants four kids NOW when she has even more responsibility?
I get what the author is trying to do here. Maybe it's just giddiness on her part.
I like the concept of the story so far however, though I don't understand why her hubby is a train wreck when it's obvious he's known some things for a decade and a half.
HOW DO YOU LIKE THEM APPLES NOW
better hope you can still make the sauce, TK U MLJ LV NV
32-18=14
She is 32, been working for 18 yrs. Hmmm... isn't that against the law?
Too many things do not compute.
Jennifer said too many things over and over. Even if Arthur had put in a long day, how did he come to look so disheveled? Are we to assume she is really 32 (Hence, she still has time to have four children.) and the 18 years of employment is in error? I'll read at least one more chapter to see if I feel it will be worthwhile to read the entire story.
18ys work
Read the rest of the story and 18 years work makes sense
This is an exceptionally good story, not only for the site, but among the thousands of novels I've read.
WORKAHOLICS MUST PAY A PRICE
the the others have to bear. TK U MLJ LV NV
Second time through...
Thanks for the offering.
Doesn't add up
The story begins with her at age 32 having worked 18 years for the bank. Ok so that means she started at that wicked old bank at age 14. No wonder the husbands pissed off she missed her entire childhood.
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