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Betrayed Ch. 03

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by Anonymous10/28/07

Great work!

Love it so far. Hope you keep it going!

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by Anonymous10/28/07

Just gross

What about having the punishment fit the crime?
He got out his kit, laid it on the counter and brought over a pair of pliers and a long heavy needle. He pinched the tip of her nipple tightly with the pliers, stretched it taut and slowly pierced her nipple, ignoring her cries and pleas. With the needle in place, he returned to the counter, picked up a silver ring and brought it back. He finished pushing the needle through and then threaded in the ring, closing it tightly with the pliers. He worked in the same manner on her other nipple and then left to put away his instruments.
At this point, Mike and his brother are just two sadistic dudes, getting their jollies. Tortuous reading.

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