Pity you could not get the spelling right, if you are going to text OK but if you are writing a story then you have to spell all the words and not use short cuts, it spoiled it so much I had to stop reading (what I think would have been a great read) as it was just not working well.Sorry
PLease when you get time continue this. This husband doesn't know what he is ignoring. Find them to be very hot. Love the detail and the characters. I can see them cuming far
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yummy
this is one of my favorite scenes....please write more
more please
hot story! greg was such an enthusiastic lover, he ravished helen. now i'm wet, where's my greg? please write more.
Pity
Pity you could not get the spelling right, if you are going to text OK but if you are writing a story then you have to spell all the words and not use short cuts, it spoiled it so much I had to stop reading (what I think would have been a great read) as it was just not working well.Sorry
Love love love this
PLease when you get time continue this. This husband doesn't know what he is ignoring. Find them to be very hot. Love the detail and the characters. I can see them cuming far
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