All Comments on 'Selfish Lover'

I liked the story, but I didn't love it. You repeated various scenes, sexual acts, and dialogue way too often for my tastes. If you could condense this story into 1.5 pages, instead of 2.5 pages, I think the story would be a true winner.

I personally love this type of story and I think you did a nice job with it. Yes, please continue with it.

Thanks for writing and sharing it with us.

Write more write more!!Love it.

She's just fair, and it's in the nature of things that he knows his place! I found your story *enthralling*, as are all your stories. It features lots of direct speech, which draws the reader into the story. She revels in humiliating him, and has him beg for what she really wants. He actually begs for her to humiliate him, and she literally tugs on the leash with ever increasing strengh. Yes, I look forward for a follow-up, and for other stories in the same vein! I'd personally have less rimming and more barefoot worship, and just as much cunnilingus and soft domination. I appreciate the fact that your stories hold no cuckold, strap-on, creampie, forced bi, cross-dressing, whipping, as these often seem to be associated fetishes. I've nothing against these fetishes, they just don't appeal to me :-), and I'm glad when I read good stories like yours, where I don't have to skip any part!

you should definitely continue the story.

wonderful, this`s the best i have read congratulation1

The person who wrote that this is repetitive and could be condensed to half its length is exactly right.

I thought the story was great! Thank you so much, I loved her arrogant, selfish attitude and the way she only cared about her pleasure, WOW! please continue to share your writing gift, and I'd love to see more ways this self-aware Goddess indulges her superiority at his expense!