Stray Prey Ch. 01

Very Nice Start

Great start. I do hope you will continue with the story. I'd like to see where it goes.

Here we go again

Just for once I'd like to see a heroine who isn't annoying or stupid.

I really enjoyed this first chapter

Please keep going. I'm not sure why the person below me thought the heroine was annoying and/or dumb. I personally enjoyed the Little Red Riding Hood symbolism. Now, I'm not sure if the first man (creature?) who caught her in the park was a big bad wolf or not, but the "stray" who chased him off is mighty fine.
Please continue!

Great Start would love to read more

Snap!

You have my attention. You are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors!

I loved the way you have sit the story up. Dark, scarey night, alone, in the woods, sounds, then the attack. Then saved, but not saved. Very ingenious.