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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/28/08

Love the Eleanor Rigby reference

Interesting story...although I would have liked to have seen more of the interplay between Mackenzie and his victim...

Love the reference to the Beatles song...it created a darker undertone to the whole story, and the echo of the same song in the back of my head as I was reading gave it that edge!

Keep writing, if you're going to keep writing like this.

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by Catytheghost01/31/08

great story

Just read it interesting take on the old song to.

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