All Comments on 'Two Many Toes Finds a Husband'

Not exactly my cup of tea, but well told and executed. Young girls often become obcessed over one thing or another in this case her on one man. Seldom does this lead to happiness.

Nicely told, without unnecessary embellishments.

It was very romantic without necessarily being erotic. I think this passive patient view of romance is damaging to the female psyche but it is widespread.

It was mostly well written. I wonder if it is a bit patronising to genuine native Americans? I think i would have like this story a lot better when I was younger and less jaded.

I loved your story. It is writen well with the heart of one who knows the ancient ways. Reguarless of what other may think or say you have touched upon truths which are seldom spoken of.

Lovely story.